...yea that about sums it up. All you are missing is some type of transformation where her clothes change. that makes the 12 year olds swoon lmao. Nice job
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...yea that about sums it up. All you are missing is some type of transformation where her clothes change. that makes the 12 year olds swoon lmao. Nice job
Yeah I was debating doing a long clothes changing scene, but I was animating it rather quickly so that my friends could laugh at what we put together promptly. So, the transformation scene turned into Sakuroski just bopping around the screen with the sword a bunch. I like it this way too.
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Ive got to say wow
Nicely done. You dont see many drawn animations or if you do they stink and last 10 seconds. You were able to tell somewhat of a story. Your drawing was fantastic kinda rugged for your theme of western. It fits. you captured multiple angles like the bullets dropping that was an amazing touch. I enjoyed it. Time for the constructive part of my review. though there was a bit of a story, I couldnt gather much more than there was a fight in a town where one building was on fire. the music was kinda creepy and it threw me off at first but I guess it was all made sense when the guy the cowboy was facing and supposidly killed sprouted multiple arms.... 10/10 artwork 9/10 music 7/10 story 10/10 originality Good work. I look forward to your next animation.
thanks ^^
well, yeah, i know the story is not the strong point here, hehe.
I wanted to play with atmosphere and test my drawing and animating skills.
Glad you liked it, i'll be doing moar and moar! (or that's the plan, lol)
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goku cannot lose to mario!!!
sure he can, except in the mind of a dbz fan
at least..
there was some sort of a plot.. better than your 2nd one ill tell you that much.. which is kinda sad. tips to get better and recieve better scores.
1. better voice acting.
I could hardly understand what was being said. i caught "in my house" thats about it...
2. the story needs to be longer.
By the time i figured out what was going on she was being eaten and it was over.
3. perhaps a better plot with which you can run with.
i will give you props on the artwork tho. I cannot draw that well so good job on that. but perhaps more detail to the characters.
It's a parody of a page, just one. Thats why it's short and has got a bad plot.
Not nice voice acting because I'm spanish.
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